This first appeared in my "Poetic Ponderings" column in Wilmette Living.
Jane Hall is a long time Wilmette resident and my wife. Her poem Hairpins was a finalist in the 2018 Faulkner - Wisdom Creative Writing Competition. Poetry comes when the spirit moves her. Ink Smears began as images scribbled on an envelope, the final edit, a collaboration between us. She remembers sitting at her desk looking at a picture, reflecting on her childhood home. The two houses, evocative metaphors on life.
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Ink Smears
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the woman in the window stares out
fountain pen meets blank paper
wisps of wind through cracked
glass pane tousle hair,
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rain falling from roof
hits copper, rotting timber,
years of neglect
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ponders and stares at small gold
frame picture of another house
blanketed with snow
on a lake,
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deep shadows cover the lawn
trees that no longer shade, obscure
the family’s rooms, windows,
her room,
void
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who lived there
droplets pour, hit paper, blur thoughts
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Ink Smears was first published in Front Porch Review, April 2021.Poetry comes when the spirit moves her. Ink Smears began as images scribbled on an envelope, the final edit, a collaboration between us. She remembers sitting at her desk looking at a picture, reflecting on her childhood home. The two houses, evocative metaphors on life.
Â
Ink Smears
Â
the woman in the window stares out
fountain pen meets blank paper
wisps of wind through cracked
glass pane tousle hair,
Â
rain falling from roof
hits copper, rotting timber,
years of neglect
                                                                                                          Â
ponders and stares at small gold
frame picture of another house
blanketed with snow
on a lake,
Â
deep shadows cover the lawn
trees that no longer shade, obscure
the family’s rooms, windows,
her room,
void
Â
who lived there
droplets pour, hit paper, blur thoughts
Â
Ink Smears was first published in Front Porch Review, April 2021.
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